I am so glad to have Monica Fairview visiting Leatherbound Reviews again! She is a joy to have as a guest; her posts are always entertaining. And today's excerpt is no exception!
So sit back and enjoy an excerpt that will leave you wanting more!
So sit back and enjoy an excerpt that will leave you wanting more!
First of all, thank you for this delightful opportunity to
visit Leatherbound Reviews. I’m very pleased to be here with the wonderfully supportive
and talented Jakki, who wears so many hats. I’m quite awestruck by her energy!
I’m excited to introduce you today to my latest novel, Mr. Darcy’s Challenge, a comic Pride & Prejudice ‘what if’
variation which focuses on the search for Lydia Bennet and its aftermath. In
this variation, Mr. Darcy doesn’t find Lydia as quickly as he does in Pride & Prejudice. In fact, she
remains rather elusive. Not only that, but initially, after a rather unpleasant
encounter with Elizabeth at the beginning of the novel, Darcy is not entirely
certain he even wants to try and find
her. Only his honor as a gentleman keeps him steadfast.
Mr. Darcy’s Challenge
is the second volume in The Darcy Novels series, but can be read independently.
In this scene, the Bennets, the Bingleys and the Darcys are
in Brighton, all searching for Lydia. Elizabeth has encountered an old
childhood friend of hers and has gone out riding with him along the Marine
Parade.
“Do you know where I can find Miss Bennet?”
said Darcy, abruptly. “She is not with Miss Bingley, and she is not in her chambers,
either. I expected to find her making preparations for the dance tonight. Has
she gone out?”
So now she knew what was bothering him. The
explanation for his strange mood was apparent.
“Why,
yes,” said Georgiana. “An old acquaintance of hers called on her. They have
gone on a carriage ride along the promenade to reminisce about old times.”
“A female acquaintance?” said Darcy.
Georgiana hid a smile by pretending to cough.
“No. It was a gentleman.”
Darcy frowned. “She went on a carriage ride
with a gentleman, without a chaperon? How could you let her do such a thing
when you know the reputation of the whole Bennet family hangs by a thread?”
“William, be reasonable. How could I possibly
have prevented her? I have no influence over her at all. However, you need not
worry in any case. Jenny has gone with her.”
This should have had the effect of appeasing
her brother, but it did not.
“And how, pray, are you supposed to do
without Jenny? This shows a lack of consideration—”
“I have no need of Jenny at the moment,
William. Would you have preferred Miss Bennet to be without a chaperon?”
interrupted Georgiana, mildly.
Another silence.
“I do not wish to be cooped up inside,” said
Darcy. “We must take advantage of the good weather. Shall we go for a drive as
well, Georgiana?”
Georgiana would have been happier if Darcy
had offered to take her out before he knew what Elizabeth was doing. No doubt
Darcy was hoping to catch a glimpse of Elizabeth’s friend and discover who he
was. However, she did not really mind, since she had been hoping to be invited
for a drive anyway. She agreed at once, hoping William’s mood would improve
amongst the revelers.
~~x~~
It was a most pleasant day. White clouds
outlined the horizon, appearing like snow-topped mountains from afar, and the
white-tipped sailing boats completed the illusion. The blue of the sky and the
blue-green of the sea complemented each other, like a well-chosen bonnet
matching a pelisse. Darcy had dismissed the coachman, deciding to handle the
ribbons himself, and he had taken Georgiana up in the front with him. Although
the sea breeze prevented her from feeling hot, the sun was warm. Georgiana put
up her parasol to protect her face. She did not wish to turn red as a lobster
before her first dance.
“I am excited about attending the dance
tonight,” she said.
Her brother said nothing, concentrating on
handling the ribbons as a carriage with four noisy Corinthians dashed through
the crowd, causing havoc all around them.
As the traffic settled into a more sedate
pace again, she felt her brother’s gaze on her.
“Are you not worried you will encounter
Wickham at the dance? It is very likely he will be there. You must be
prepared.”
The question was unexpected and Georgiana was
flustered by it at first. However, she composed herself quickly. If her
reaction at the parade was anything to judge by, she did not feel herself
likely to be ill at ease.
“It no longer matters,” she replied. “I know
now that I do not care for him at all.”
Darcy reached out and gave her hand a
squeeze. “You do not know how relieved I am to hear it, Georgiana. I will not
conceal from you that I have been very worried that you would succumb to him
once again.”
She shook her head vigorously. “Never!”
“You have removed a huge burden off my
shoulders.”
A gentle breeze came up from the sea. It was
fresh and wet and carried with it the scent of a great salty expanse, teaming
with millions of fellow creatures. It felt good to be alive – and free. At this
instant in time, she loved the sea, and the way the waves danced as they
crawled merrily onto the shingle and she loved the way the horizon seemed to
stretch on forever, like her own future.
Just then, a carriage came into view, moving
in their direction, with Elizabeth and her acquaintance talking animatedly and
Jenny smiling at something they were saying.
“Oh, there they are!” she exclaimed. She
waved and Elizabeth grinned and waved back.
Darcy turned his head sharply to inspect the
gentleman in the other carriage.
“Look out!” said Georgiana as their carriage
veered to the right.
By the time Darcy had straightened the
horses, Elizabeth and her companion had passed them by.
“I have seen him before,” said Darcy. “I feel
I ought to recognize him. I seem to remember something unpleasant about him. Do
you know his name?”
I hope you have enjoyed this selection. Thank you once again
to Jakki for her kind invitation to join you all here on Leatherbound Reviews.
What a teasing excerpt, Monica! Now you have my in tatters, dying to know who this man is and what he wants with Elizabeth! I can only hope Darcy will be there to save the day if needed. Excellent way to pique the reader's interest!
Thank you for that and again for visiting, Monica!
*******
From the Publisher:
In this humorous Pride and Prejudice Variation, Mr. Darcy
is determined to win Elizabeth Bennet's hand in spite of her rejection and he
has a strategy worked out. He will rescue Lydia Bennet from Wickham and will
return to Longbourn to convince Elizabeth to marry him. But when a chance
encounter prompts Darcy to propose once again to Elizabeth before he has
rescued Lydia, his plans go horribly wrong.
Broken hearted, disillusioned and bitterly regretting his
impulsive action, Darcy sees no point in assisting Miss Bennet. After all,
rescuing Lydia might save Elizabeth’s reputation, but why should he care when
they have no future together? His code of gentlemanly conduct, however, demands
that he fulfill the terms of his promise to her. Once again, Darcy finds
himself faced with impossible choices: helping Elizabeth when she is certain to
marry someone else, or holding onto his dignity by turning his back on the
Bennets once and for all.
Pride and love are at loggerheads as he struggles to
choose between his mind … and his heart.
Volume Two of The Darcy Novels continues the story began in Mr. Darcy's
Pledge but can
be read as an independent book as well.
Author Bio:
Monica is a longtime admirer of Jane
Austen and likes to write down her fantasies about living in the Regency
period. She has written two traditional Jane Austen sequels,THE OTHER MR. DARCY and THE DARCY COUSINS and a story in the anthology
JANE AUSTEN MADE ME DO IT. Her new
series consists of traditional Pride and
Prejudice ‘what-if’ variations. MR. DARCY’S CHALLENGE is the second in the
series.
Monica Fairview’s real claim to fame is
that she lived in Elizabeth Gaskell’s house in Manchester as a teenager, when
it was crumbling and neglected, so you could say she has the smog of NORTH
& SOUTH in her blood. After that, Monica lived in the USA for many years,
where she taught literature to captive victims (not necessarily captivated).
She now lives in Surrey within the Greater London area and loves visiting
historical properties when it isn’t raining.
***GIVEAWAY TIME***
Monica Fairview is graciously giving away ONE (1) ebook copy (open internationally) and ONE (1) paperback copy (USA only) of Mr. Darcy's Challenge!!
To enter, please comment on today's excerpt. I'd love to hear your thoughts on the excerpt. :)
Please leave your email address or Twitter handle. If you do not, your entry will not be entered.
Giveaway ends December 15, 2014!
Good Luck!!
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Poor Darcy it's never going to be easy is it, and who is Elizabeth's friend?
ReplyDeletemeikleblog at gmail dot com
Thanks for stopping by, Vesper! Hopefully you'll find out!
DeleteAlways a pleasure having you stop by, Vesper! It does not look like it will be smooth sailing for Darcy, does it? ;) Good luck in the giveaway!
DeleteThe excerpt really makes me want to read "Mr Darcy's Challenge". I am intrigued as to who this mystery friend is!!
ReplyDeletelambaa97@hotmail.com
Hello, Amber, delighted to meet you here. I'm glad you enjoyed the excerpt.
DeleteThanks for stopping by, Amber. I agree. And I want to know why Mr. Darcy has an uneasy feeling about him… I do love good foreshadowing in a story! :)
DeleteI'm very pleased to hear you enjoyed Mr. Darcy's Pledge, Wendy!
ReplyDeleteHi, Wendy! Thanks for commenting. So glad you hear you enjoyed book one. Hopefully, you can read book 2, Mr. Darcy's Challenge, soon! :) Best of luck in the giveaway!
ReplyDeleteExcellent ! I cannot wait to read it all ! A little jealousy in a story is always fun :)
ReplyDeleteclutterkitty @ gmail.com
I agree, Nicole. I love a bit of jealousy in my novels, especially because I know things will work out in the end, but the jealousy always makes it more entertaining. :)
DeleteThanks for commenting! Best of luck in the giveaway!
I love the idea of making Darcy just a teeny bit jealous, Nicole. Thanks for reading :)
DeleteHmmmm ... someone Mr Darcy finds unpleasant - who could that be??? LOL! I love that it made him jealous and I am wondering who it is now!!! He would recognize Colonel Fitzwilliam, I can't see Elizabeth laughing with Mr Collins, I am dying to find out who it is!!! Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteNothing like a little mystery once in a while. Happy you enjoyed the excerpt, Erika.
DeleteMr Darcy must work hard to win Elizabeth heart!! A love rival and a little jealousy are a good match!!
ReplyDeletechiarapiccirilla(at) hotmail(dot)it
Absolutely, Chiara! It will make him appreciate Elizabeth a bit better.
DeleteWhat a cliffhanger! Leaving us in such suspense to find out who is with Elizabeth. Can't wait to read both your books in this series! Thank for hosting Jakki and for the giveaway opportunity. My email address is tdungnvu (at) yahoo (dot) com
ReplyDeleteDung Vu -- I do love cliffhangers. Good luck with the giveaway.
DeleteOooooo, a mystery man! Darcy does NOT like that, does he? ;-)
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt, Monica! Thanks for the generous giveaway.
Pamh5230 (at) yahoo (dot) com
He wouldn't would he, Pamela? Can't say I blame him!
DeleteIt's a pleasure, Pamela.
I loved your review Jakki. You worded it much more eloquently than I could have. I tjoroughly enjoyed this book! Thank you Monica for the generous give away. sksmper25 (at) gmail (dot) com
ReplyDeleteSorry. Spelled my email wrong. Dumb virtual keyboard. skamper25 (at) gmail (dot) com
DeleteThank you so much for saying so, Debbie!
DeleteI'm very curious about Elizabeth's friend and would love to know more of the story. Thanks for the delicious excerpt, Monica.
ReplyDeleteevangelineace2020(at)yahoo(dot)com
A pleasure, Lutthien. Good luck with the draw!
DeleteA mystery man!? Hmm. I'm eager to find out who he is! If he's a baddie, then...may all the seagulls in Brighton poo on his head! :P
ReplyDelete@jaffobsession
DeleteLOL! Only you, Monica! ;)
DeletePretty much. I'm not sure if I'm goofier ON the cold medicine or OFF it.
DeleteAre you feeling better, Monica? Bird poo? I agree with Jakki. Only you!
DeleteLOL, MonicaP. I'm guessing you don't like seagulls? Feel better soon!
DeleteNo, I do like them. Lol I'm feeling much better, thank you. My family members keep passing this trifling cold back and forth amongst us.
DeleteOoooo! Excellent excerpt! I cannot wait to read book2!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the giveaway!
cherringtonmb at sbcglobal dot net
Lovely to see you here, BeckyC. Glad you enjoyed Mr. Darcy's Pledge!
DeleteOh I want to know who the mystery friend is. Thank you for the opportunity to win a copy of the book. my email is carterkristina2 (at) gmail.com
ReplyDeleteOutstanding! Please don't enter me as I have the ebook on loan from Sheila LM and the print copy on its way. The cover to this book is gorgeous! Well done, Monica.
ReplyDeleteThanks for hosting, Jakki.
Thank you for your kind comment, Joy! happy to see you here.
DeleteThank you for reading the excerpt, Tina. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteHi Monica, I have a question, is this a stand-alone, or do you need to read the first? Oh, I just saw that you say above that it can be read independently! Great! Lovely excerpt! Thanks! @CandyM037
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